Check out this post on how every story should start. How to create that one line hook to capture your reader from the first sentence.
“No matter what kind of fiction you’re writing, today’s market demands you hook your reader from the very first sentence. It must be exciting. It must be provocative. Whenever possible, your main character (or villain) should be included in the sentence, along with some tantalizing sense of impending danger …”
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